‘The Manchineel Killer’ review

Here’s my review for my horror feature script, ‘The Manchineel Killer’, from SCREENCRAFT!

I’m not happy about the score this time, but the notes are very promising.

I’m relieved that I executed the narrative successfully, as it was a hard piece to put together… as to make a horror out of it, yet give the viewer a sense of reality and have them embrace the darkness…

I’m stoked that I hit that mark! 

Obsession, love, loneliness, addiction… are just the few themes I have focused on…

Writing it in a consistently stylized manner was to demonstrate my creative imagination and make this horror as a piece of art…

It tickles me that they loved the opening scene, which I bring full circle.

I do wish they gave more feedback for the characters. I would have loved to hear a more in-depth opinion on the narrative, but as they say…no word is usually a good thing…

I feel I can celebrate this review and can relax more knowing the script needs a little more work, but not a lot…

Another go at it and I hope then it will be competition worthy!

Polish, polish, polish!

Cheers to a great weekend of celebrating getting over the hurdles!

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